這電影很有趣，學(xué)生和老師都很喜歡。

　　(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

　　→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

　　你的兒子已經(jīng)長大，可以自己照顧自己了。

　　8. 盡量使句子帶點(diǎn)“洋味”

　　(1) Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.

　　→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.

　　別擔(dān)心，大膽試一試，你很快就會(huì)學(xué)會(huì)的。

　　(2) Thank you for playing with us.

　　→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

　　謝謝你陪我玩。

　　9. 綜合使用各類所謂的“高級”結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

　　→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

　　現(xiàn)在人人都知道這消息了，我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

　　(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

　　→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

　　我們所能做的只是站在那兒，設(shè)法抓住違章者。

　　(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

　　→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

　　如果她的語音不比她的老師好的話，至少也不會(huì)比她老師的差。

　　10. 適當(dāng)使用名言警句點(diǎn)綴

　　在寫作時(shí)根據(jù)實(shí)際情況恰當(dāng)?shù)赜蒙弦粌删涿跃鋪睃c(diǎn)綴文章，不僅使文章顯得有深度、有智慧，而且會(huì)讓文章在評分中上一個(gè)“得分檔次”。如：

　　(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

　　(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

　　(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”