把英語句子寫活的10種方法
學生寫作時,如果僅局限在把內容交代清楚的水準上,只選用一些普通的、直截了當的詞,或一律使用簡單句平鋪直敘,那么,這樣寫出來的文章就會像一碗白開水,呆板、單調,沒有可讀性。要使文章耐人尋味,有深度,同學們就應嘗試使用一些高級詞匯或句型,以凸顯文章的亮點,使文章增添文采,給讀者(尤其是閱卷老師留下深刻印象)。具體說來,同學們可嘗試以下方法:
1. 靈活改變句子開頭
在通常情況下,英語句子的排列方式為“主語+謂語+賓語”,即主語位于句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式,比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等,會使文章增強表現(xiàn)力。如:
(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.
→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.
在小山頂上有一座古廟。
(2) You can do it well only in this way.
→ Only in this way can you do it well.
只有這樣你才能把它做好。
(3) A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。
2. 避免重復使用同一詞語
為了使表達更生動,更富表現(xiàn)力,同學們在寫作時應盡量避免重復使用同一詞語來表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到“喜歡”二字,就會立刻想起like,事實上,英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:
I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜歡看書,而我的兄弟卻喜歡看電視。
3. 合理使用省略句
合理恰當地使用省略句,不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔,而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。如:
(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是這樣,我以后再來拜訪。要是不忙,我現(xiàn)在可以見他嗎?
(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.
→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.
如果天氣好,我們就去;如果天氣不好,我們就不去了。
(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申請這份工作的,但她沒有。
4. 適當運用非謂語結構
非謂語結構通常被認為是一種高級結構,適當運用非謂語結構,會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。如:
(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。
(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我沒法和她聯(lián)系。
(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
他出生農民家庭,只上過兩年學。
5. 結合使用長句與短句
在英語寫作中,過多地使用長句或過多地使用短句都不好。正確的做法是,根據實際情況在文章中交替使用長句與短語,使文章顯得錯落有致,這樣不僅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章讀起來鏗鏘有力。如:
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒后,我們唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,還有的講笑話、下棋,大家玩得很開心。
6. 適當使用短語代替單詞。
(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已決定長大了當老師。
(2) He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
他不大喜歡音樂。
(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.
→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.
他告訴我問題現(xiàn)正正在討論中。
7. 恰當套用某些固定表達。
(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.