高級英語寫作手法(2)
高級英語寫作手法
高級英語寫作手法3
11. 輕度抱怨：
Unfortunately, + 表示 something is wrong 的句子
環(huán)境：
A company has sent you a bill for the wronggoods.
Unfortunately you sent us a bill for the wronggoods. Please could you send us a correct bill assoon as possible.
Your new photocopier has broken down. Youhave to write to the company who sold it to you.
Unfortunately our new photocopier has broken down. Please could you send a repairman tofix it for us as soon as possible.
Two temporary secretaries do not speak English. You have to write to the agency whosent them to you.
Unfortunately two temporary secretaries you recommended to us do not speak English.We would be grateful if you could recommend two more who could speak English.
You keep receiving letters for someone else. You have to write to the post office.
Unfortunately I keep receiving letters for someone else. Please could you make the addressclear before you deliver letters every day.
12. 提醒某人對某事的注意：
I should like to draw your attention to (the fact that)…
I should like to point out that …
如果你提醒的事情對方已經(jīng)知道(你想表達你的生氣)：
I should like to remind you that…
I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that …
環(huán)境：
One of your staff keeps parking his car in front of the main door, the space which isreserved for the MD.
I should like to remind you that the space in front of the main door is reserved for the MD.
Someone is interested in purchasing a large quantity of your simplex cameras. Tell himabout 25% discount for large orders.
I should like t draw your attention to the fact that we offer about 25% discount for largerorders.
One of your staff arrives half an hour late for work every day. (She should start at 9.30.)
I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that work start at 9: 30 every day.
Someone is interested in your products. Tell him that you guarantee that your prices arethe largest in the country.
I should like to point out that we guarantee that all prices are the lowest in the country.
13. 要求某人采取行動：
We must insist that …DO… (DO指動詞原型)
注：請注意這一句型和句型8的區(qū)別。
環(huán)境：
We must insist that you deliver the goods immediately.
14. 警告：
Unless…
If…(not)…
We will be forced to …
環(huán)境：(What warnings would you give these people?)
A company that has not paid your bill
Unless you pay the bill, we will be forced to take legal actions.
Another company that is using your company’s car park
If you do not move your car away from our park, we will be forced to turn to the police.
An employee who always arrives late for work
Unless you come to work on time, we will be forced to fire you.
A builder who has left a lot of their tools in your office
If you do not take your tools from our office, we will be forced to throw them away.
15. 強烈抱怨：
注：
強烈抱怨遵循以下步驟：
a. 闡述發(fā)生的問題：it is now over nine months since we placed this order and we are stillwaiting for the cabinets.
b. 使用句型12：I should like to point out that we have already paid for these cabinets.
c. 使用句型 13：we must insist that you deliver them immediately.
d. 使用句型14：unless we hear from you within 7 days we will take legal action.
高級英語寫作手法4
寫作后的檢查(包括圖表寫作)
檢查的四個主要方面：
1、標點符號：
完全禁用的符號：
?。?ldquo;” 《》。
2、拼寫：
雙寫輔音
y改成復數(shù)
3、語法：
主謂一致
冠詞
次序
介詞
時態(tài)
漏詞
4、可能導致信息表達不清的因素：
太長的段落
太長的句子
運用不常使用的詞匯
一次包含太多的信息
信息不完整
信息順序混亂
圖表作文
對于線性圖表的描述
上升
1、 對于上升趨勢的描述：
a. 可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：
to increase
to go up
to rise
to grow
to jump
to leap
to soar
to shoot
to pick up
b. 可以使用的名詞：
an increase
a growth
a jump
a soar
an upward trend
2、對于上升到某個位置的描述：
a. 1. a. 中的動詞+to+具體數(shù)據(jù)。
b. 1. a. 中的動詞+to+the peak of+具體數(shù)據(jù)。
c. 1. a. 中的動詞+reaching the peak of +具體數(shù)據(jù)。
d. 1. a. 中的動詞+reaching + 具體數(shù)據(jù)。
e. to peak at + 具體數(shù)據(jù)
f. to climb to + 具體數(shù)據(jù)
3、對于上升的程度的描述：
a. 1. a. 中的動詞+by + 具體數(shù)據(jù)。
b. 1. a. 中的動詞+副詞。
對于平穩(wěn)的趨勢的描述，可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：
to hardly change
to have little change
to keep steady
to level off
to remain constant
to stay the same
表示程度的副詞：
1、程度較大：
considerably
dramatically
greatly
markedly
obviously
quickly
rapidly
sharply
significantly
suddenly
2、程度較小：
slightly
gradually
slowly
steadily
時間的嵌入
嵌入時間時所使用的介詞和介詞詞組：
in
from……to……
between…….and……
during……and……
at the start of ……
by the end of ……
over ……
at the end of ……
throughout ……
時間’s + 具體數(shù)據(jù)
高級英語寫作手法5
上升和下降趨勢的組合描述(嵌入了時間和程度之后)：
1. 先上升后下降的句型：
...... increased slowly during…… and …… but fellsharply in …….
A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followedthe sharp increase in …….
2. 先下降后上升的句型：
…… fell before …… began to make a recovery ……
…… continue the recovery, climbing to ……
…… dropped during …… but increased again in ……
…… fell and then pick up during ……
…… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……
3. 起伏波動的句型：
…… fluctuated sharply all through ……
4. 波動不大的句型：
…… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……
柱狀圖形的描述
轉換為線形圖形的描述
餅狀圖形的描述
對于百分比進行描述所使用的句型：
…… % the …… is/has/have/are ……
…… accounts for ……% of the total
…… takes up ……% in the whole chart
趨勢的比較
1. 表示相似的句型 (實例) ：
Both share prices rose sharply in January.
Neither company has made a profit yet.
Like X, Y fell in June.
X rose just as sharply as Y.
2. 表示差異的句型(實例)：
X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.
X fell quickly compared to Y.
Unlike Y, X rose by 10%.
X rose far more dramatically than Y.
3. 表示倍數(shù)的句型：
the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……
4. 客觀比較的句型：
…… is …… in contrast to ……
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