同學(xué)們在備考復(fù)習(xí)時也花了很多精力在長句的練習(xí)上，考試時也會盡量使用長句。這種想法確實有一定的道理，因為很多考試如新托福的寫作科目評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中確實有從語法或用詞的多樣性等角度考察語言質(zhì)量的評分項目，考生如果能夠熟練地運用各種句式寫出精彩的長句，確實能給文章增色不少。下面是小編為您收集整理的3招讓你的雅思寫作簡潔完美，供大家參考!

　　3招讓你的雅思寫作簡潔完美

　　建議一：避免空洞的單詞和詞組

　　1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

　　When all things are considered , young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

　　這句話當(dāng)中的“ when all things are considered ”和“ in my opinion “都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

　　2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

　　“ due to the fact that ”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　建議二：避免重復(fù)

　　1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：:

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

　　large對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

　　更簡潔的表達(dá)方式為：

　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

　　2.有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：

　　My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

　　這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡潔：

　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

　　建議三：選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法結(jié)構(gòu)

　　選擇合適的語法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也很重要，但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語法結(jié)構(gòu)時可以參考的原則：

　　1.一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：.

　　The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

　　從意思上來分析，上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“ grandfather's not being able to study ”，而在表達(dá)這個概念時，原句用的主語是situation，謂語動詞是was，不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點概念，可以改為下面這句話：

　　My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

　　2.避免頻繁使用“ there be ”結(jié)構(gòu)，例如下面的句子：

　　There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

　　可以改為：

　　My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

　　更簡潔的句式為：

　　My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

　　3.把從句改為短語或單詞。例如：

　　Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

　　簡介的表達(dá)方式為：

　　The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

　　4.僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語而不是主語的時候，才使用被動語態(tài)。例如：

　　In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

　　本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family ”，而使用了被動語態(tài)后，仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動語態(tài)，相對來說更簡潔一些：

　　In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

　　5.用更為精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語，例如下面這句話：

　　My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

　　Stand around doing nothing其實可以用一個動詞來表達(dá)，即loiter：

　　My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.

　　6.有時兩句話的信息經(jīng)過組合完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達(dá)，例如：

　　Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

　　兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡潔的句子：

　　Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

　　雅思寫作高分句型--倒裝句

　　在雅思寫作中，考生如果想得到高分，除了需要依靠較出彩的思想、高分單詞以及常見關(guān)聯(lián)詞外，還需要運用雅思寫作高分句型。在這些句型中，除了常見的從句(定語從句、狀語從句以及名詞性從句)之外，倒裝形式更是拿分的關(guān)鍵點。下面就和小編一起來看看吧：倒裝共分兩類：全部倒裝和部分倒裝。全部倒裝是指將全部謂語動詞都放在主語之前。部分倒裝是指將謂語的一部分如助動詞，系動詞或情態(tài)動詞放在主語之前。如果句中的謂語沒有助動詞或情態(tài)動詞，則需添加助動詞do, does或did, 并將其放在主語之前。

　　A. 全部倒裝：把全部謂語放在主語前。

　　1. there be句型(特殊的全部倒裝句型)

　　There be…是一種較為常見的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，通常用于表達(dá)“某地有某人或某物”，在使用此句型結(jié)構(gòu)時，應(yīng)注意下列問題：

　　1) 主謂一致

　　例句：

　　There is littleopportunity for children to stay at home until the age of 7 because theirparents are both working.

　　There are manyreasons why we should not slaughter animals for their fur or leather.

　　2) be動詞可以是任何時間狀態(tài)

　　例句：

　　There have beenmany government which invest a large sum of money in researching the space.

　　There has beena discussion over whether children should be sent to school at a young age.

　　3) 在There be結(jié)構(gòu)中除了運用動詞be之外，還可以用seem, appear, happen, exist等。在這種句型中，謂語的單復(fù)數(shù)形式根據(jù)靠近謂語的主語而定。

　　例句：

　　There seemed tobe no permanent solution to the disappearance of minority languages andcultures.

　　2. there \ here\ now \ then放在句首時，句子進(jìn)行全部倒裝。

　　Now is the time to realize the seriousness of this problem and takeactions immediately.

　　3. 方位狀語開頭時，句子進(jìn)行全部倒裝。

　　On the internetare provided all kinds of entertainment activities.

　　In books areembalmed the greatest thoughts of all ages.

　　4. 主語與表語互換位置(當(dāng)主語過長而表語過短時，可以把主語與表語互換位置從而構(gòu)成全部倒裝)

　　Well-known isthat energy crisis poses a threat to the society.

　　Important isthat the government raises people’s awareness of the environmental protection.

　　5. 伴隨狀語開頭(With或Along with放在句首時，句子應(yīng)該全部倒裝)

　　Along with thepopulation expansion comes the housing shortage in big cities.

　　Withglobalization have come many problems.

　　B. 部分倒裝：只將情態(tài)動詞、助動詞或系動詞放在主語前

　　1. only +單詞、詞組、狀語從句位于句首，句子進(jìn)行部分倒裝。

　　Only in thisway can we deal with the unemployment of young people.

　　Only througheducation can we rise in the world.

　　2. 以否定意義狀語開頭，句子進(jìn)行部分倒裝。

　　Never hasthis topic failed to fascinate people.

　　3. neither nor開頭，句子進(jìn)行部分倒裝。

　　The financialincentive is not the only factor in encouraging employees, neither is ahigher position.

　　Economicsuccess is not the only factor in achieving happiness, neither is socialstatus.

　　4. so開頭，句子進(jìn)行部分倒裝。

　　The averagepeople need privacy. So does the sports player.

　　Success teachesus something about ourselves. So does failure.

　　5. 讓步狀語從句由though或as引導(dǎo)時可用倒裝，將表語放在句子最前面。

　　Convenient as thetele-education is, it cannot replace the traditional education as themainstream form of education.

　　6. so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句可用倒裝。

　　So common isthe phenomenon that we should adopt harsh measures to resolveit.

　　以上就是倒裝句的全部內(nèi)容，希望大家能熟練掌握，寫出高分文章!總之，如果考生能將這些原則運用到位，那么在雅思考試中寫作成績出高分是指日可待的。但是雅思寫作高分句型的熟悉還是在于勤奮的練習(xí)，所以小編還是建議眾多的考生們勤加練習(xí)，在考試的時候才可以信手拈來。