在托?？谡Z(yǔ)考試中，精彩的開頭總是能產(chǎn)生“先入為主”、“先聲奪人”的效果，因此想要拿到高分成績(jī)，需要在，備考時(shí)候多花費(fèi)點(diǎn)時(shí)間、多動(dòng)點(diǎn)腦筋在開場(chǎng)白上下功夫。

　　廢話連篇 不知所云

　　Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 慘不忍睹

　　Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

　　偏離主題 無(wú)軌電車

　　Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。

　　中式英文 人見人暈

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。

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　　過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單 沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)

　　Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

　　意思重復(fù) 原地踏步

　　Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

　　觀點(diǎn)武斷 態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬

　　Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

　　中國(guó)俗語(yǔ) 胡亂翻譯

　　Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

　　觀點(diǎn)模糊 態(tài)度曖昧

　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……