在雅思大作文的題型中，有一種特殊的題型，題目的最后一句是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion”這種題型被稱為“D&G”題型，這種題型讓考生去寫(xiě)雙邊并且給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　　但是，大部分中國(guó)學(xué)生的問(wèn)題在于觀點(diǎn)太過(guò)中庸，無(wú)傾向性，如“both views have their significance”“the purpose is good however it is hard to come true”等等，也就是在Introduction的最后一句沒(méi)有表現(xiàn)出鮮明的立場(chǎng)，其實(shí)這是不對(duì)的。

　　其次，雙邊列舉法是考生最穩(wěn)的得分形式，為什么這么說(shuō)呢?因?yàn)槲阌怪靡呻p邊一定比單邊好寫(xiě)，好寫(xiě)的原因一是觀點(diǎn)一正一反比較好想，二是一正一反能寫(xiě)的話比較多。采用列舉式的寫(xiě)法旨在提高文章的邏輯性和條理性，簡(jiǎn)單明了地讓考官明白每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)有幾個(gè)小點(diǎn)，分別是什么，讓考官快速地明白筆者的想法和邏輯思維的走向。

　　連接詞可采用最簡(jiǎn)單的first, second, third, finally等，也可以使用in addition, moreover, alternative等，總之表現(xiàn)出觀點(diǎn)的羅列即可。

　　“雙邊列舉式”就不得不提conclusion，這一段可以說(shuō)是寫(xiě)作功底的展示，短短的兩三句話需要總結(jié)整篇文章的觀點(diǎn)，所以需要考察學(xué)生的同義詞轉(zhuǎn)換能力或者名詞的概括能力，比如，觀點(diǎn)“這個(gè)東西好”的兩個(gè)支撐點(diǎn)是“漂亮”和“實(shí)用”那可以用一句due to its external and practicability總結(jié)，這里考察的就是名詞external和practicability的使用。

　　當(dāng)然，凡事無(wú)絕對(duì)，怎么寫(xiě)都不會(huì)錯(cuò)，只是說(shuō)這樣的表達(dá)方式更為妥帖。

　　念念不忘，必有回響

　　The issue regarding whether making money is the most important goal of businesses is controversial. There are a large number of people who support that businesses should also undertake social responsibilities. Personally, taking social responsibilities is capable of bringing two main benefits despite some existing drawbacks.

　　There is no denying that social responsibility can enhance the reputation and profitability. First, information spread is getting fast since rapid development of information media, which implies that any contribution from enterprises could be easily recognized by public. Thus, this would drive people to form a positive impression to these enterprises, thereby increasing their sales volume. Second, most socially responsible investments are government-supported. Empirically, businesses in purpose of enhancing social welfare, such as infrastructure construction and philanthropy, can gain government financing. Because it can alleviate the burden of government, so that to solve the problems about insufficient fund as well as promote the corporate image.

　　In addition, the fact that undertaking social responsibilities needs high costs may be the most typical reason unaccepted by business men. As known, profitability is the key index of enterprises based on adequate normal profits. Hence, overemphasized social responsibilities might cause companies’ inability to survive. Moreover, this requirement may be considered as unfair treatment to small companies. In contrast to large companies, most small entities are self-sustaining and rely on profits to further develop. Nevertheless, large companies with abundant capitals enable to invest some of funds on public utilities even if unprofitable, as they can treat these funds as advertising fees for corporate image and goodwill.

　　In conclusion, undertaking social responsibilities is beneficial to enterprises, which mainly embodies on two aspects: enhance of reputation and government supporting. However, the contradiction with profitability should not be neglected, it affects some small companies significantly.

　　但據(jù)我了解，很多學(xué)生并不傾向于單邊作文的撰寫(xiě)，首先，時(shí)間緊迫，沒(méi)有充足的時(shí)間去想觀點(diǎn)，雙邊一正一反幾乎不需花時(shí)間思考。其次，邏輯清晰，一正一反邏輯最為清晰了，很多寫(xiě)單邊的學(xué)生容易描述著就寫(xiě)篇了，導(dǎo)致文章結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰，所以，我在這里為那些只想拿6.5的學(xué)生推薦一種寫(xiě)法，叫“雙邊列舉法”

　　顧名思義，就是在每一個(gè)主體段里列舉出自己的觀點(diǎn)，用first，second等連接詞去連接觀點(diǎn)，十分的清晰明了，非常適合中檔學(xué)生去練習(xí)。

　　【本文作者：Lynn。(公眾號(hào)：英文寫(xiě)作批改與指導(dǎo))】

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