托福獨立寫作萬能模板通用(2)
2、強調(diào)副詞
(1)Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.
(2)Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.
(3)Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.
3、 副詞表示某一地域或某一領(lǐng)域
Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.
Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.
三、用插入語開頭,表示說話人的態(tài)度,或使句子的意思更加準確:
1、Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
2、Generally speaking, winter in Vancouver is gloomy.
類似的插入語有:
(1)no wonder no doubt
(2)in other words in my opinion
(3)in conclusion in fact
(4)as a matter of fact
四、用形容詞、并列形容詞或形容詞短語開頭,修飾句子的主語,表示主語的特征或狀態(tài):
1、Frantic, the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.
2、Tasty and crisp, potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.
3、Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.
4、Desperate and hopeless, the poor man committed suicide.
五、用分詞、分詞短語開頭:
(a) 修飾句子主語,表示主語所處的狀態(tài)或主語同時進行的另一個較謂語動詞次要的動作:
Scared, the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 狀態(tài))
Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 狀態(tài) )
Spoiled by his parents, the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 狀態(tài))
Puffing and hugging, he finished his run.( 另一動作)
Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一動作)
(b) 修飾謂語動詞,表示原因、時間等
Lying down on the couch, he felt much relaxed.( 時間)
Feeling bored, she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)
Wanting to find out the business hour, she called the store.( 原因)
Having completed the form, he mailed it out immediately.( 時間)
六、用介詞短語開頭,表示句子謂語動詞發(fā)生的時間、地點、方式、原因、條件等:
1、On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window
2、pretending to look at something there.( 時間)
3、Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地點)
4、Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)
5、Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)
6、In case of fire, use the stairways.( 條件)
七、動詞不定式開頭,強調(diào)謂語動詞動作的目的:
1、To celebrate the arrival of the Millennium, we held a grand party in the hotel.
2、To show my trust on him, I deposited $ 10,000 into his bank account.
八、用獨立分詞短語開頭,使句子有正式的味道:
1、Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
2、Sea gulls flying over the water, the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.
3、A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.
九、用過渡句開頭,表示此句與上下句的關(guān)系:
1、Consequently, I slowed down to avoid a fine ticket.
2、In fact, she was a kindhearted woman.
十、用同位語開頭,表示主句位于動詞發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、方式、條件等:
1、A signing officer of the bank, Jane signs her name hundreds of times each day at work.
2、A TV addict, Jim watches TV movies one after another every evening until after midnight.
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾模板
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾模板一: 重申立場+反問句
例如:托福寫作題目:Some people like to live in a small town, while others like to live in a large city. If you had a choice, where would you like to live?
我方立場:I would like to live in a big city.
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾: Although a growing number of serenity-seekers regard the smaller community as their dream homeland, I still opt for the metropolis for its convenience and dynamic life. When it comes to living, how can one possibly deny that the purpose of life is to explore new things that small towns fail to offer?
解析:這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反問句的寫法,很大氣。“盡管越來越多尋找寧靜的都市人把小城市視作自己的夢想家園,但我仍然覺得大城市更勝一籌。當談到生活,誰能否認生活的目的不就是探索新的東西嗎?而這一切都是小城市無法給與 的。“ 反問句寫的是反方立場的弱點,這其實在內(nèi)容和Plan B是相同的,只不過用的反問句來加強語氣。
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾模板二:重申立場+反方觀點的弱點
例如:托福寫作題目:When people go on a trip, some like to go with a friend while others like to go alone. Which do you prefer?
我方立場: I would rather to travel with a friend.
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾: Taking all of the factors above into account, being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip. This even makes more sense if one is fully aware of the possible dangers of travelling on one’s own, that is, being helpless when emergencies occur and having no one to share the excitement.
解析:這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反方觀點的弱點。“考慮到以上所列出的論點,我們可得知當說到旅游時有人陪伴是一個更好的選擇。這點更說得通,如果一個人清楚地明白獨自旅行潛藏的壞處,即遇到緊急情況的無助感以及無人分享旅途的興奮感。“語言上的主語替換尤為靈活,I would rather to trav
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾模板三:重申立場+補充
例如:托福寫作題目: There are people who learn about life by listening to their friends’ or families’ advice. On the other hand, there are those that learn from personal experience. Which one do you prefer?
我方立場:It is better to learn from personal experience.
托福獨立寫作結(jié)尾:In a nutshell, it is quite common for us to seek advice from our buddies or family when faced with life dilemma, but in most cases, more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience. After all, it is our action rather than other people’s words that determine what kind of people we want to be. (62 words)
解析:這個結(jié)尾采用的是Plan A,重申立場使用了比較法,這也是托福結(jié)尾最常用的一種方法,因為大多數(shù)寫作題目都涉及兩者對比。“總而言之,當面臨生活困境時人們往往會向朋友和家人求助,但在大多數(shù)情況下,如果我們自己嘗試一些事情,往往會學到更多的經(jīng)驗。“語言轉(zhuǎn)換上,使用了換主語和換詞的方法,我方立場It is better to learn from personal experience,主語是It, 但在結(jié)尾換成了benefits, 整個句子即變成了more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience.結(jié)尾第二句話,補充了我方立場的合理性,進行了升華。”畢竟,決定我們將來成為什么樣的人的關(guān)鍵點并非是他人的言語而是我們自己的行為。“
el with a friend.轉(zhuǎn)換為了Being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip.
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