雅思寫作動筆前5分鐘思考的重要性
在開始你的雅思寫作之前,一定抑制住自己迫切動筆著急忙著寫完作文的心。我知道時間寶貴,所以你打算邊寫邊構思,可是這真的是一條雅思寫作的不歸路,因為匆忙之中的動筆,往往造成無可挽回的錯誤,這錯誤可能是審題,可能是觀點,可能是論證方法。所以,請停下腳步,用寶貴的5分鐘想一想想一想。
雅思寫作動筆前5分鐘思考的重要性
有效的寫作來自于有效的思考
你寫的和你想的必須是一樣的,而不是寫前想一想,提筆又是另一篇——只是簡單的規(guī)劃思路是不夠的 最好是寫之前想好,而不是寫完了再來想——雅思考試真的沒時間打幾遍草稿 什么時候想?每段開頭和每句開頭——句子是你作文的關鍵組成部分 怎么想?定向思維——最好列個清單,這樣會很有幫助的。
解釋一下為什么要在”Thinking”上花時間(而不是草草動筆)—–表面上看起來這樣做會“浪費”一些時間,因為大多數人的想法是:快些寫啊寫啊!想啥啊! 但是當你想完了以后,你會發(fā)現你寫的更有效(more efficiently)–也就是說,廢話少了,不僅寫完了,而且還寫好了(這就不僅僅是寫完一篇作文,而是寫好一篇作文) 來看看具體怎么做吧!
清晰的思維使你更好的寫作
其實道理很簡單,你雅思作文一半的得分都來自 Task Response (是否切題,還是寫跑題了)與Coherence and Cohesion(文章連貫性,是不是上句不接下句,還是很有層次,有順序)。這兩個評分標準跟你使用的語言(單詞,詞組,語法)都沒什么關系,但是跟你的行文思路(thought)和文章結構(organisation)直接相關。換句話說,你全文語法(grammar)全對,詞匯(vocab)用的都非常漂亮,你也就能得5分。要拿那另外的分,就得有思考的技能。
腦子里的規(guī)劃是不夠的
在考場上再去想你要寫什么基本是沒什么卵用的。就算你現想出文章的結構,所使用的詞匯還有思路,你還是不知道怎么把它們拼湊到一起去。并且?guī)缀蹙蜎]什么學生可以在考場上的那一點點時間就可以規(guī)劃出以上所提的這些。原因是什么?因為你覺得想這些東西是在浪費時間。 大錯特錯。你的寫作規(guī)劃不是完整的答案,你可以邊寫邊完善。 你的結構/思路/詞匯全都需要你的規(guī)劃(Plan)來組織。
別老是打草稿,想好了再寫 如果你沒辦法在40分鐘內寫完雅思作文那大部分都是因為你老是寫錯,各種錯(語法錯了啊,單詞不會拼啦,反復表達一個意思又重寫句子啦等等)耽誤了你的時間。要避免這個問題就一定要想好了再寫。想想應該怎么說最好。如果你以前寫作一些學術類的文章,你就應該知道,最好是把你一遍遍打草稿的時間拿來想想到底該怎么寫。
寫每一段之前,想一想
學生寫作文的時候,寫著寫著就停筆了,他不知道怎么寫下去了!別笑,我們大家都經常犯這樣的錯誤。為什么?因為句子與句子之間都沒什么聯系。(沒有連貫性)。 你得有一個完整的思路。必須把整個思路想清楚了再動筆,別小看這個小技巧,你試試,寫作立馬不一樣了!(而不是邊寫邊想)
想你所想
OK,我們知道動筆前要想了,那“想”些什么呢?這取決于你的經驗,你的學歷等等。不要怕觀點不對,說你自己心里想的,說實話就行了。
檢查清單
段落
思路/語言 我的語言和思路夠寫一篇完整的文章嗎? 這段話的中心思想是什么?我能寫一句話嗎?
文章結構
在我的文章里有中心思想嗎? 這一段跟其他段有什么聯系?
連貫性/結構
這段話在整個文章結構里是什么? 對于這個意思的表達,我需要解釋原因或舉例嗎? 這段話要寫幾句?
句子連貫性
我打算用這幾個句子說明個什么問題?在腦子里能把它說出來嗎? 這個句子是主要想法嗎?還是一個例子?一個解釋?或者別的? 這個句子跟上個句子有聯系嗎?需要用連接詞嗎?可以用別的方式去連接嗎?
語法
你確定語法都正確嗎?如果不確定的話,能不能換個說法(不至可能出現語法錯誤?) 語法是不是太簡單了?(只有陳述句)還是太重復了?(老是定語從句)
詞匯
準確使用詞匯了嗎? 我需要使用上面句子的詞匯嗎(還是要換一個)?我使用了同義詞嗎? 這段話是書面體嗎(而不是口頭語)?
方法總結:或許,擺了這么思考項,有人已經看不下去了:你倒是讓我60分鐘寫一篇文章,還是讓我想一篇文章啊。講了這么多,其實是想告訴大家,做任何事情,都是講方法論的,雅思寫作自然如此。誠然你可以激情靈感迸發(fā)地邊寫邊思考,讓靈動的思緒帶領你的文章的肆意前行??墒?,這種方式是很危險的,是難以復制的,你狀態(tài)好時,可能發(fā)飆寫出高分作文,可你狀態(tài)不好時,有可能讓你寫出一篇偏題的,觀點孱弱的,結構混亂的垃圾文章。上面講的這個5分鐘審題,其實就是為了一步步告訴你一個安全保險的捷徑寫作方法,前期的麻煩是會了給你以后減少麻煩。在剛開始操練時,很耗時,可只要熟練之后,它就會帶來你整個寫作過程的高效。你的框架,你的觀點,你的主要論據已經提前構思好。那么無論如何,你不會偏題,你的字數不會缺,你的觀點論證過程夠飽滿。這幾點加起來就是一個7分的作文了。
雅思寫作觀點語料:語言
language 語言
English as an international language
English is widely used around the world
It is becoming a global second language
It is the dominant language of technology, science and international business
International business meetings are regularly held in English
The most important textbooks and journals are published in English
The ability to speak English is a necessary skill in the modern world
Negative of English as an International Language
If one language is dominant, other languages may disappear
The dominant language brings its own culture
American culture has become popular around the world
Other cultures may be damaged
As an alternative to English, a new global language could be invented
It would have no nationality or culture attached to it
This could help to promote international peace and understanding
Esperanto is an example of a language that was invented with this aim
相關雅思歷史真題
1.Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
2.Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
3.Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
雅思寫作觀點語料:房屋建筑
Housing and Architecture住房與建筑
State/council housing 公共住房
In some countries the government provides state or council housing
This helps people who cannot afford to buy their own house
It can be argued that state housing creates dependence on the government
People should be rely on the government to look after them
People have no incentive to earn money and buy their own home Council properties are often made with cheap, poor-quality materials.
Old Buildings 老建筑
Historic buildings are part of a country’s heritage
They should be protected
Old buildings are often considered to be works or art
They give character to cities and attract tourists
They show us how people lived in the past
We identify countries by architectural symbols like the pyramids in Egypt
Governments should spend money on looking after historic buildings
They need regular repairs and maintenance
New buildings should be designed to complement them
Modern/green buildings 現代/綠色建筑
Modern buildings should be designed to be environmentally friendly
They should use less energy and produce less waste
Modern insulation can make houses more energy-efficient
Solar and wind power can be used to generate electricity
Rainwater and waste water can be recycled and used to flush toilets.
Modern glass buildings take advantage if natural light
相關雅思歷史真題
1.It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?
2.Some people believe that new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思寫作觀點語料:錢
Money金錢相關語料
Money and Society
Society has become increasingly materialistic
People aspire to earn more money
They want a bigger house or a better car
We connect wealth and material possessions with happiness and success
Brands like “Armani” or ”Mercedes” are status symbols
Advertising creates new desires and needs
It persuades us to buy the latest styles
Positives of Consumerism
Consumerism creates employment
It helps to reduce poverty
It encourages innovation and creativity in business
We live in a global economy
We have a better quality of life
Negatives of Consumerism
Consumerist societies create more waste
They use more natural resources
They cause damage to the environment
Consumerism creates a “throw-away” culture
Advertisers tell us who we are and what we want
Wealth does not lead to happiness
Materialism causes greed and crime
We should return to traditional values like sharing
相關雅思歷史真題
1.Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
2.Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.
Do you agree or disagree?
3.Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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