托福寫作句型總結(jié)升級版
為了幫助大家寫好托福作文,小編在這里給你們總結(jié)了一些句型,希望對大家有幫助。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)1
1)使用同義詞。
比如以下的一些寫作高頻詞匯的同義詞,這些詞出現(xiàn)的尤為頻繁。要學(xué)會用同義詞來替換它們。
在綜合寫作中教授說話不能總是用think,還可以用believe, consider, deem, figure out。在托福獨立寫作中表示近來的時間狀況用nowadays,還可以用recently, currently, at present, in recent years, these days
再比如表示重要的詞有important,一篇文章如果要求描寫某物重要,不能只寫important這一個詞吧,和它類似的還有necessary, crucial, essential, vital, significant , indispensable, momentous, 如果還需要再變化,就可以用下面的改變詞性的方法。
2)改變詞性。
n.→ Adj. 比如:important改成be of importance
n. → v. When we look at a comparison between A and B…
When we compare A and B…
Adj. → n.
There are a variety of solutions to the problem.
There are various solutions to the problem.
3)更換使用不同的承接詞。承接詞不僅連接段落和段落,還連接句子和句子。熟識一些常用的承接詞對寫作將會有極大的作用。
because of → due to, owing to, because, as, since, for
but → however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas
so → therefore, hence, thus, consequently
4)形容詞的逆向表達。在某些形容詞上進行修改,會達到非比尋常的效果。
Eg: not as easy as…→more difficult than…
Not uncommon→common
The cheapest → the least expensive
其次,是句型的使用。在新托福寫作部分,評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中非常重要的一項就是句型結(jié)構(gòu),要求句型結(jié)構(gòu)做到豐富多變。例如下面的典型美句,就可以讓你的文章加分:
1)it句
It is delightful to have friends from distant lands.
It is undeniable that…
It is obvious that…
2)雙否句
it is by no means uncommon to find…
…never fails to …
3)倒裝句
So severe is this problem that we have no alternative but to take some feasible measures to deal with it.
Only through education can we rise in the world.
此外,美國人的另一特點就是注重具體內(nèi)容。即要求我們寫的作文具體化。新托福寫作的宗旨在于communicating information。中文經(jīng)過長久的發(fā)展,追求的是含蓄、抽象,用最少的話來表達深刻的思想,但美國人思維卻是具體的。如果按照中國人思維寫作,美國人會無法領(lǐng)會,我們的托福作文也就只能得低分。
美國人托福思維還體現(xiàn)在綜合寫作中。綜合寫作中的閱讀部分就是這種思維,聽力和閱讀結(jié)構(gòu)相似,而內(nèi)容相反??梢?,只要我們能夠做到用美國人的思維、結(jié)構(gòu)看問題,搭出大骨架,從生活中選取豐富的素材使之具體、豐滿,再輔之以閃光的詞匯句型、修辭手法,要拿新托福寫作高分就不再是遙不可及的夢想。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)2
我們首先來欣賞一下美國的約翰·F·肯尼迪總統(tǒng)所說過的一段話:
Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and success of liberty.
這段文字中,所有動詞和賓語的形式都是一致的,語言簡潔而有力度。
這種將兩個或者兩個以上的成分用相同的語言結(jié)構(gòu)表達在英語中稱為平行結(jié)構(gòu)(Parallelism)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)不但結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,而且語言優(yōu)美,甚至可以包含豐富的情感和風(fēng)格,不但在演說中經(jīng)常使用,而且在任何英文考試中,都可以成為提高句子質(zhì)量和表達水平的終極武器。相反,有些同學(xué)的句子很長,使用了從句、非謂語等各種復(fù)雜語法,如果結(jié)構(gòu)松散,讓人難以理清頭緒,也不會被考官視為優(yōu)質(zhì)句子。
其實絕大多數(shù)中國學(xué)生其實都不擅長寫平行句式,這是完全可以理解的。
畢竟除了詩歌和對聯(lián),中文在大多數(shù)情況下都對結(jié)構(gòu)是否平行沒有特殊要求,我們依照松散的中文句子翻譯出來的英文也就很難做到平行了。
" 高校企業(yè)參與了這個神器的新工具的創(chuàng)造,確保了它的融資,并花費時間時產(chǎn)品投放市場。" 從中文的角度,幾乎是沒有毛病的。
但是直接翻譯成英文可能就變成了這個樣子:The high school entrepreneur was involved in the creation of a new miracle tool, secured financing for it, and spent time getting the product to market. 這個句子中,"創(chuàng)造"、"融資"和"推廣" 都是由學(xué)校這個主體發(fā)出,最終對象都是 "新工具" 的動作。
因此我們可以將它改成這樣的平行結(jié)構(gòu):The high school entrepreneur created, financed, and marketed the new miracle tool. 這個句子的修改過程,首先是要有意識地使用平行結(jié)構(gòu),其次是在中文上就對語序作出調(diào)整,最后是明確可以并列的成分,也就是動詞。
除了以上的動詞,介詞、連詞和冠詞也經(jīng)常能引導(dǎo)平行成分。
我們常用的both ... and、either ... or、neither ... nor和not only ... but also也可以用來連接平行結(jié)構(gòu),使用時要特別注意前后的結(jié)構(gòu)是否完全平行。
接下來讓我們一起用幾個句子改錯來練平行結(jié)構(gòu):
1、 許多年從業(yè)人員面臨兩難問題;工作時為了金錢還是樂趣?
原句:A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or work for enjoyment.
平行版:A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or to work for enjoyment.
2、這對于勝利者和那些輸?shù)舻娜藖碚f都是一個問題。
原句:This could be a problem for both the winners and those who lose.
平行版:This could be a problem for both the winners and the losers.
3、奧林匹克志愿者們做好準(zhǔn)備、完全有能力、下定決心圓滿完成任務(wù)。
原句:Olympic volunteers were ready, filly able, and were quite determined to do a great job.
平行版:Olympic volunteers were ready, able, and determined to do a great job.
4、學(xué)生可以登陸Facebook,花時間閱讀郵件,瀏覽一些博客推送,然后開心地發(fā)微博。
原句:Students can log onto Facebook, spend time reading email messages, review some blog posts, and then tweet with joy.
平行版:Students can check Facebook, read email messages, review blog posts, and then joyfully send tweets.
以上基本的平行結(jié)構(gòu)大家是否都掌握了呢?
在托福作文中,有很多可以使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)的地方。尤其是進行過程描述或者同時提出多個細節(jié)時,試著把多個動作用同樣的形式表達出來,一定會給考官留下思路清晰、語言簡潔的好印象。同學(xué)們不妨一試。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)3
第一, 定語從句。
這應(yīng)該算是寫作中最常用的一種句型之一。適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用定語從句可以給你的文章增色不少。
例如,下面的這兩個句子用上定語從句馬上就變成了一個漂亮的復(fù)雜句。
Bad books contain evil thoughts. In them, there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex.
→ Bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil thoughts.
第二, 狀語從句。
在寫作當(dāng)中運用的最多的是以下五種狀語從句,即原因狀語從句,讓步狀語從句,條件狀語從句,時間狀語從句和目的狀語從句。
1. 原因狀語從句:常由because, as, since和for引導(dǎo)
Eg: Nonetheless, I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh demerits.
盡管如此,我還是贊成太空探險,因為它的好處遠遠大于壞處。
2. 讓步狀語從句:常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引導(dǎo)
Eg: Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
盡管這一觀點被廣泛接受,很少有證據(jù)表明教育能夠在任何地點、任何年齡進行。
3. 條件狀語從句:常由if, on the condition that和providing that引導(dǎo)
Eg: If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.
假如你要取得成就或要實現(xiàn)你的雄心壯志,你必須努力工作、艱苦奮斗、準(zhǔn)備好條件。
4. 時間狀語從句:常由when和while引導(dǎo)
Eg: When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
說到教育,大部分人認為其是一個終生的學(xué)習(xí)。
5. 目的狀語從句: 常由so that和in order that引導(dǎo)
Eg: Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.
成千上萬的人們不得不花費的精力和時間學(xué)習(xí)新的技術(shù)和知識,使得他們在就業(yè)市場能保持優(yōu)勢。
第三, 賓語從句。
Eg: Some people claim that government should be mainly responsible for the environmental pollution.
一些人認為政府應(yīng)對環(huán)境污染負主要責(zé)任。
Eg: Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
許多專家指出這是現(xiàn)代社會發(fā)展必然的結(jié)果,無法避免。
第四, 同位語從句。
Eg: It is an undeniable fact that environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious.
環(huán)境污染變得越來越嚴(yán)重是不可否認的事實。
Eg: No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
沒有人能否認這一基本事實:對于一般工人來講,輕松掌握這些技術(shù)是不可能的。
第五,主語從句。
Eg: What has caught our attention is /It is noticeable that the environment in both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating.
值得注意的是農(nóng)村和城市的生態(tài)環(huán)境都在不斷惡化。
Eg: It is universally acknowledged that environmental pollution becomes one of the most serious problems in China or even the world as a whole.
眾所周知,環(huán)境污染問題是中國乃至世界面臨的最為嚴(yán)重的問題之一。
第六,強調(diào)句: It is + 被強調(diào)的內(nèi)容 + that
Eg: It is cars and factories that release a great deal of gases, polluting the environment.
汽車和工廠排放大量的廢氣,使得環(huán)境被污染。
第七,倒裝句。
Eg: Only if the government will take some appropriate measures, will this intractable problem be tackled.
只有政府采取適當(dāng)?shù)?a href='http://www.rzpgrj.com/fwn/cuoshi/' target='_blank'>措施,這個棘手的問題才能被解決。
第八,被動語態(tài)。
Eg: Every means should be tried to protect the environment on which people live.
人們應(yīng)竭盡全力來保護我們賴以生存的環(huán)境。
第九, 分詞結(jié)構(gòu):包括現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞。
Eg: Tourism, which is a rising industry, has become the major source of economy, playing crucial role in many Asian countries.
旅游業(yè)是一個新興的行業(yè),它成為經(jīng)濟的主要, 在很多東南亞國家起著尤為重要的作用。
Eg: To be more specific, government should stage some relevant laws or regulations to severely punish the factory producing a great number of pollutants and the people littering or spitting deliberately.
具體來說,政府應(yīng)該出臺相關(guān)法律法規(guī)對制造大量污染物的工廠及故意亂扔垃圾隨地吐痰的人進行嚴(yán)懲。
第十,插入語。
一種獨立成分,與句子的其它成分一般沒有語法上的關(guān)系,大都是對一句話作一些附加說明或解釋。它通常由一個詞、一個短語或一個句子構(gòu)成,位置較為靈活,可置于句首、句中或句末,一般用逗號或破折號與句子隔開。
Eg: Computer, an indispensable part in our life, has brought us great conveniences.
電腦,我們生活中必不可少的一部分,給我們帶來了極大的方便。
Eg: College students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.
大學(xué)生,沒有社會經(jīng)驗,容易上當(dāng)受騙。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)4
作文中常用句套:
下文中出現(xiàn)的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在寫作中要根據(jù)上下文進行適當(dāng)替換.
開頭:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been broughtsintosfocus.
提出觀點:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
進一步提出觀點:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
舉普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
講故事
(先說故事主體),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
托福寫作句型總結(jié)5
造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達
I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達
1. 句型分析
英語的句型包括以下幾種,簡單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中,一般使用復(fù)合句,輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句,當(dāng)然肯定要有簡單句,做到長短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個句子給大家認識并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個復(fù)合句,由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中,有一個that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句對result進行解釋說明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個句子,是一個并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個句子,成為并列句,再一個which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。
2. 有問題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個問題:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接連句,三是句子連接不正確。
1). 破碎句
所謂破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式,如分詞),或者是從句單獨成句。
破碎句:She singing alone. (無謂語,singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)
正確句:She is singing alone.
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨成句)
正確句:He did not come because he was sick.
2).接連句
所謂接連據(jù),就是兩個句子直接連在一起,既未使用連詞,也未使用正確的標(biāo)點符號。
接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確,就是兩個獨立的句子之間以逗號連接,這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個句子。
不正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
II 高分表達
除了在句式上長短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達外,朗閣海外考試研究中心建議新托??忌褂靡恍┨厥獾木涫?,以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、狀語前置、插入語等,筆者還提出另外一個句式的多樣變化,即主語多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個句子概括介紹前面四種句型,而重點分析主語多樣化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定詞位于句首的倒裝。)
正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強調(diào)句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強調(diào)the internet)
正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語: New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語)
主語多樣
1. 她突然想到了一個主意。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下,考生會馬上對這句話進行翻譯,基本不會動句子結(jié)構(gòu)。但是以人作為主語的英語句子總是不能夠很吸引人,所以這個句子如果稍微做下修改,以后面的賓語“主意”做主語,這個句子會發(fā)生一些變化。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2. 他開車心不在焉,幾乎闖禍。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
這句話依然是拿人做主語,稍微改一下,把心不在焉這個形容詞的名詞形式做主語,會大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3. 美利堅合眾國創(chuàng)立于1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話沒有任何錯誤,但是不夠多樣,可以用時間作主語。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
III 實用句型
在文章的最后,朗閣海外考試研究中心為大家列舉幾個新托??荚囍锌梢允褂玫奶子镁湫?,為一些寫句子摸不著頭緒的考生提供幫助。
1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準(zhǔn)備新托福考試是值得的。
2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒有比接受教育更重要的了。
3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們在事業(yè)上有所追求。
4. It is time the related department took proper measures.
(虛擬句式)相關(guān)部門早該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┝恕?/p>
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