今天小編為大家分享一篇關(guān)于托福寫作四大誤區(qū)的“排雷”經(jīng)驗(yàn)帖，這篇文章的作者在第一次考托福時(shí)就順利拿下了托福寫作滿分的戰(zhàn)績(jī)，TA認(rèn)為想要拿到托福寫作滿分，在備考過(guò)程中有四點(diǎn)常見(jiàn)誤區(qū)需要注意，我們一起來(lái)膜拜學(xué)習(xí)一下吧!

首考托福拿下寫作滿分的大牛告訴你，你離滿分只有四個(gè)誤區(qū)的距離

誤區(qū)一：拿高分一定要語(yǔ)言高大上

許多同學(xué)認(rèn)為，自己拿不了寫作高分，是因?yàn)樽约旱挠迷~不夠華麗，句式太簡(jiǎn)單。但是其實(shí)，我首考時(shí)，用的都是最基本的托福水準(zhǔn)詞語(yǔ)，沒(méi)有什么大詞。但關(guān)鍵是，我的詞語(yǔ)一直都在以同義詞的方式變換著，句型雖然也只使用了幾種，但也是交叉變換著用。變化很重要，這能體現(xiàn)考生對(duì)于語(yǔ)言的靈活運(yùn)用程度，給考官一種新穎的感覺(jué)。

托福寫作中可以靈活運(yùn)用的九種句型：

主謂賓

主系表

There be

被動(dòng)

強(qiáng)調(diào)句型A

Eg: It is the picture of __hat impresses me deeply.

強(qiáng)調(diào)句型B

Eg: The picture of __does have a deep impression in my memory.

倒裝

Eg: Were you stand beside the sea, you would remember the happy moment in the past. (倒裝+虛擬)

虛擬

平行

Eg：《雙城記》給了我們best example:

It was the best of times,

It was the worst of times.....

We had everything before us, we had nothing before us......

誤區(qū)二：套用模板一定拿不了高分

有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為，拿滿分的同學(xué)一定沒(méi)有用模板。但是，模板是自己對(duì)于“未知性”很大的托福寫作考試的最好的準(zhǔn)備，哪怕遇到很難的題目，也能自信滿滿地“噼里啪啦”敲出一兩行模板句，然后寫作的靈感就來(lái)了。如果事先沒(méi)有任何寫作模板的準(zhǔn)備，等到考試時(shí)腦子一熱，就啥也寫不出來(lái)了，只能面紅耳赤地坐在那兒聽(tīng)考場(chǎng)中別人熱熱鬧鬧的鍵盤敲打聲。

綜合寫作中一定要用模板，一定要用模板，一定要用模板!在時(shí)間比較緊的綜合寫作時(shí)，用模板可以節(jié)約時(shí)間，為自己增加信心和底氣。

獨(dú)立寫作中，開(kāi)頭、中間段的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾句、結(jié)尾都可以用模板，這樣自己的句型都盡在自己的掌控內(nèi)，將更多的時(shí)間放在作文內(nèi)容的構(gòu)思上。用模板時(shí)，不要照搬網(wǎng)上或者機(jī)構(gòu)老師給的模板，自己學(xué)聰明一點(diǎn)，DIY拼湊、用同義詞、同義句的形式修改一下，就是自己的unique one啦!

附上一份綜合寫作模板：

The lecture is mainly discussing_____, _______and _______ by____, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that _____, _______and _______.

First of all, the speaker thinks that ______. In contrast, the reading passage believes that ______. So, the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

Second, the speaker discusses______, contradicting what is stated in the reading that ______.

Finally, the speaker raises the issue that ______. This point disagrees that ______ demonstrated in the reading.

誤區(qū)三：字?jǐn)?shù)一定要多才能拿高分

許多機(jī)構(gòu)的老師都會(huì)信誓旦旦地跟學(xué)生說(shuō)：“字?jǐn)?shù)寫不到500字，還想拿高分?”但是我寫作考滿分那次，綜合寫作寫了273個(gè)字，獨(dú)立寫作也只寫了368個(gè)字，真心不能算是字?jǐn)?shù)多的。我有個(gè)同學(xué)自己參加考試，洋洋灑灑爭(zhēng)分奪秒，考場(chǎng)獨(dú)立寫作打了七百多個(gè)字，可最后只有23分，可見(jiàn)字?jǐn)?shù)多不見(jiàn)得就能拿高分。

我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)是字?jǐn)?shù)可以不多，但是一定要說(shuō)理具體、條理清晰，句子之間要有邏輯，思維不要太跳躍。考官一天批改那么多作文，當(dāng)然喜歡讀上去很順暢、連貫的作文啦!

誤區(qū)四：托福寫作的準(zhǔn)備只需要想思路

許多同學(xué)覺(jué)得，只要捧著托福寫作機(jī)經(jīng)想想思路，就能在考場(chǎng)上寫作得心應(yīng)手。但是，我認(rèn)為，托福寫作一定要上機(jī)練習(xí)!想思路和上機(jī)親自寫作完全是不一樣的感覺(jué)!想思路的結(jié)果就是，考場(chǎng)上有了思路可卻無(wú)從下手，對(duì)句型的掌握程度、詞匯句子的使用和表達(dá)完全不熟練，甚至連打字都磕磕絆絆，時(shí)時(shí)打錯(cuò)，這種不熟練會(huì)使自己更加緊張、慌張，從而影響自己的發(fā)揮。

而如果平時(shí)就經(jīng)常上機(jī)練習(xí)，考試時(shí)就會(huì)感到非常心態(tài)平和，打字都特別順暢，寫起句子來(lái)很熟練，表達(dá)清晰，完全就是平時(shí)訓(xùn)練的感覺(jué)。

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：21世紀(jì)將有什么重大變化

The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

Now that we are in a new millennium, we can assume there will be changes in the world. I predict that the changes will be in the areas of information dissemination, global alliances, and family structure.

In the past decades, the computer was responsible for changing the way information was organized. Now, the computer plus the Internet is changing the way information is spread. Information will now be universally available to anyone with a computer. You will not have to go to libraries to do research; you will not have to travel to visit scholars; you will not have to go to a bookstore to buy a book. You can do all of this from your home on the computer.

In the past decades, the nations of the world aligned themselves with the United States, the former Soviet Union, or with one another in a loose alliance. In the future these alliances will be more fluid. Some countries will align politically with one country, but economically with another. Some countries will share technology and other information, but will not trade together. Some countries, which have long been enemies, will align militarily for regional security.

The family structure will not be based on a mother/father/child pattern. Single parent families will be more common and often the child will not be a biological child of the single parent, but will be adopted. Other family structures like domestic partnerships will become more accepted.

Whatever the changes may be, whether in the way we receive information, the way nations align with one another, or the way family units are defined, you can be sure that there will be more change. Change is a constant.

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：好鄰居的素質(zhì)

Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us many help, and everyone will benefit from a good relationship among neighbours. In my point of view, these are three conspicuous aspects of the qualities of a good neighbours.

One of the most important characteristic of good neighbours is that they have a good living habit and are friendly to others. A person with bad habit will affect your daily life. For example, children are most likely to be influnced by bad neighbors and carry on bad habits. On the other hand, being friendly is also an important nature of good neighbors. If neighbours are unfriendly, they are hard to approach and difficult to get along with.

Another important aspect of of good neighbors is that they should be willing to help others. In our daily life, emergency situations may happen, and we may encounter difficulties which can not be resolved by ourselves. At this time, the quickest help we can get is probably from our neighbors.

To some degree, neighbours are as important as relatives to us, because they could provide the immediat help. In the same way, a neighbour who likes to help others will get help in return. Help each others can form a friendly and harmonious relationship among the neighbours.

All in all, a good neighbour is someone who have a good living habit, is friendly and is willing to help others. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that a good relationship among neighbours need the maintenance from us.

托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：一家新餐廳在你家附近建立

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I can see both advantages and disadvantages to having a new restaurant built in our neighborhood. I'm worried about traffic and how it will affect our neighborhood. However, I think that it will benefit local businesses and increase appreciation for our neighborhood. Overall, I think it is a good idea.

Traffic congestion is always a concern when you build something new. Our streets are narrow, with parking on both sides. More cars traveling through the neighborhood could cause a lot of congestion. Traffic means parking problems, too. Our neighborhood has very few garages attached to the houses. Most of us depend on finding a space to park on the street. If the new restaurant is built, we'll be competing for those spaces with the restaurant's patrons. Plus, if the restaurant offers valet parking, it'll be even worse. Valet parkers work in teams to grab every possible space available on the street.

I'm also concerned about the type of patrons this new restaurant will bring into our neighborhood. A family restaurant wouldn't be a problem. However, if it's going have a bar and dancing, then there could be problems. The restaurant would stay open later, and people leaving the restaurant might be drunk. Who wouldn't worry about rowdy customers staggering around our neighborhood in the early morning hours, looking for their cars?

I have to admit, though, there are advantages to a new restaurant. Our neighborhood could certainly use the jobs the restaurant would provide. Not only that, the money neighborhood residents would earn there would likely be spent at other neighborhood businesses. This would give a boost to those businesses and make our neighborhood more prosperous.

A new restaurant would also attract a lot of people to our neighborhood. They could see what a nice area this is to live. That might attract new residents to the neighborhood. That would be a good thing, because we've been losing residents to the suburbs the last couple of years.

There are a lot of details to consider, but all in all, I support the idea of this new restaurant in our neighborhood.

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